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My very first critique in english, wow! I hope my english is okey and yes... I hope you will understand it! XD
Well, at first: This picture is so damn beautiful! It's really a speedpaint? Wow...>_< I can't really see that thing, just in the legs and the paws. The fur is done in an awesome way. It looks so furry, and a bit real. I like the snouth, the nose and the eyes the most. Very well done. The ears are perfectly done for a hyena! Wow I love the form of them and it's so hyenalike. On the back and the nack the fur is the best I think. It looks better as on the but, hind legs and the tail.
I have to critique now. That you have used references is great! Not so much people do this and I think, yes, I can see it, that you have looked to this animals. Well, I have to give you an advice... Please use the skelleton of a hyena. It's so much better to see their anatomy. Well, the hyenas have long for legs, but the hind legs are so smaller then them. So it looks like german shepherd or the back is falling down at the boody. I hope you understand...>_<" You can see it here: [link]
So I think the hind legs are just tooo high and too big... Or too long? I hope you do understand what I mean and I could help you..>_<
Now to the shoulder. I think the highlight is a bit too hard on the front of it. It's too bright for it, so it looks so...sticking... you know?
I hope you don't mind my critique! It's the first time I haven't used a german text and translated it...XD Well, not a good idea.
Have a nice day!
'r Rae