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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Awesomely awesome as usual
I loved doing those eyes. 8D They were so fun.
I really, really like how you drew the wolf, her face is done really well; the ears and the eye-area especially have great structure. I can really only find a few minor things to point out, first being that her hair seems a bit pasted-on since it isn't making a shadow on her face, nor is the ear casting a shadow on it. The nose looks a little squished, the nostrils shouldn't be touching the "rim" on it, and I think your whisker pads are drawn a bit too bulbous. Probably the only other thing I would suggest is to make the markings blend in with the fur a bit more, the markings on her back and chest look a bit painted-on as opposed to in the grain of the hair.
Again, I'm nitpicking here x3 You have the basics down wonderfully.
I like the simplistic bg a lot, but it strikes me as a bit flat. Try adding some less-blurred greenery closer to the wolf, or in the foreground to cement your subject into the background. You could even draw some larger, blurred flower petals/leaves in the air in front of her to create some depth.
Overall though, job really well done!
I see what you mean with the hair looking pasted on. Now that I look back at it it looks very much like some sort of hair sticker. x3
I've been meaning to look more into the structure of wolf noses, I winged it on this one. xD
Do you think it's the shading that makes the whisker pads too bulbous, or the initial sketch was just off?
I see what you mean about the background being flat. I'm going to try another simple bg soon to see if I can pull it off better.
Again, thank you so much for the in-depth critique! I appreciate it very, very much that you take the time to write it. :3